Homeschool last writing assignment for Year 2

The assignment was to take a previous writing project and rewrite it to make it better in every way. We chose a short story that Kioni did in Week 27.  That story was built upon a picture that Sonlight provided (see above); looking at the picture Kioni creatively told the story and wrote it out. (see below, original)

Today she revisited her work and edited it.  She worked for an hour on rewriting and drawing and then together we went through her work—daddy providing help through questions and some suggestions; she did a good job with the rewrite before we looked at it together.  The work is all hers; I just served as an editor on the side to help her dig deep into what she was already capable of. 

After we finished the rewrite, I took her drawings and drew them in pen on the final paper, then Kioni took about 30 minutes and colored them in. Voilà! The last creative writing assignment is done.